Over the past few weeks we have been part of the 'Get NZ Writing' Poetry project. This project aimed to get 96,000 poems written accross NZ! We were sent a tin with objects in it and we used one of these objects to write poems. Here is my Poem.
Hey Luken :D Its Flynn here. Even though I AM RIGHT NEXT TO YOU! I can't just say it right next to you. I realy like your poem. It has very good punctuation. Just to let you know you could put more detail in it like some pictures and stuff. :D
Hi Luken. Well done for creating your Get NZ Writing poem. I can see you used some good 'sticky words' to describe your two objects from the tin. I liked the line, ' Fast brave friendly curious hunters.' This was a great way to describe a spider. Ka pai tō tuhituhi.
Hey Luken :D Its Flynn here. Even though I AM RIGHT NEXT TO YOU! I can't just say it right next to you. I realy like your poem. It has very good punctuation. Just to let you know you could put more detail in it like some pictures and stuff. :D
ReplyDeleteHi Flynn and thank you for the comment. I thought the exact same thing for what I should work on for next time.
DeleteHi Luken. Well done for creating your Get NZ Writing poem. I can see you used some good 'sticky words' to describe your two objects from the tin. I liked the line, ' Fast brave friendly curious hunters.' This was a great way to describe a spider. Ka pai tō tuhituhi.
ReplyDeleteSpride.....Sam Cop Minis...great letter mixing for the title....very creative!
ReplyDeleteMum 🤜🤛
Thanks Mum for the complament on my title mixing. Personalky I think that next time I should work on how I'm describing the object.
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